Abhi Baaki Hai

Posted by Deepak in , , , ,


akhiri baar main use yaad karlu
ki zindagi ki ek sans abhi baaki hai

teri wafaon ko dekh kar mujhe hua yakin
ki duniya mein mohabbat abhi baaki hai

kash ki mil jayen kuch aur sansen udhar
bahut zaruri ek kaam abhi baaki hai

jate jate teri amaanat lautata chalu
ki tera dil mere paas abhi baaki hai

bahut dino se mere dil pe bojh sa hai
ki ek dost ka ehsaan abhi baaki hai

thodi der aur us-se mukhatib ho lu
ki ek sawaal ka jawaab abhi baaki hai

meri bawafai ko bhool ke nayi shuruat kar
ki tera husn aur jawani abhi baaki hai

sehne ko betaab hu ek aur sitam
ki uska akhiri vaar abhi baaki hai

uski yaadon ke ghar ko jala lu
ki 'deepak' mein kuch lau abhi baaki hai


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Hello Deepak ji,

Aapne kalam ka jo kamaal dikhaaya hai uss se main toh nishabd hu...!

Itni gehraai se kaise likhte hain aap jaise log... yahi soch rahi hu bus :)

Regards,
Dimple
http://poemshub.blogspot.com

28 April 2010 at 4:13 pm

deepak bhai,

dimmple ji ke thru aapke blog par aane ka mauka mila.

sach hee kaha hai dimple ji ne......bahut hee umdaa aur gehraaa likhte hain aap...

likhte rahiye!!

28 April 2010 at 4:19 pm

@ dimple: thanx a lot dear. and i could not understand wat u meant by 'ap jaise log' :-)

@ surinder: thanx a lot bhai

28 April 2010 at 6:56 pm

I just meant... kalaakaar log jo gehraai mein sochte hain :)

Regards,
Dimple

29 April 2010 at 2:17 pm

best one....:)

29 April 2010 at 5:14 pm

@ dimple: oh...got it

@ chetna: thanx dear

29 April 2010 at 6:08 pm

hi Deepak,

Yar i m short of words to say anythng abt dis..

really a heart touching..

keep it up man..

god bless u..

27 May 2010 at 8:16 pm

@ vishal: thank u brother. that was overwhelming.

27 May 2010 at 8:29 pm

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